Nice metaphors.

2deep4me.
"This isn't a place for you to make smug jokes, post stupid nonsense, or act like a total jerk."
(This is totally a review, you just gotta look into it to find meaning, it's really deep)

Fun enough, just a bit short for me though.

Love the music, Love the gameplay, Love the colours, love the everything.
The fact it's so simple is the big genius of it.
Love the fact I can upload my highscore too, it keeps my ego nice and toasty.

I'm rating this 2.5 stars because it made me laugh several times, and I believe that a game that helps young kids learn how to read is the perfect device to have around Newgrounds.
(I hope this doesn't fall under "smug jokes".)

Eeeeeeh.
I don't think this qualifies as a song, or even a song loop.
I could maybe see it in a video game before a boss fight, but not as pre fight anticipation music, but more of king of some kind of fucked up alarm being played constantly.

Your songs kind of remind me of my really early songs, sort of just, notes of a scale put together to try to make something but it doesn't really sound like anything. Rhythm is very very very important, even in a song that's not made to make your feet move, timing timing tiiimiiiiiiiiiiiiing.

Hate to sound like I don't have my own opinion but I agree with what the other 2 guys said.
I think you have a really good singing voice, it sounds nice.
I think you need to work a little bit more on singing and playing the guitar at the same time, it can be quite difficult to get the strumming patterns and volume right when you're trying to sing and play, I've found, and I think I saw some of those problems in this song.

I really enjoy your voice, but I felt the guitar playing was lacking a bit in terms of volume and rhythm.
7/2 Stars.

Cool stuff dude, digging the stereo. Only complain is that I think this needs to be a full song with loads of stuff going on after the intro!