I don't think this qualifies as a song, or even a song loop.
I could maybe see it in a video game before a boss fight, but not as pre fight anticipation music, but more of king of some kind of fucked up alarm being played constantly.
Your songs kind of remind me of my really early songs, sort of just, notes of a scale put together to try to make something but it doesn't really sound like anything. Rhythm is very very very important, even in a song that's not made to make your feet move, timing timing tiiimiiiiiiiiiiiiing.
Hate to sound like I don't have my own opinion but I agree with what the other 2 guys said.
I think you have a really good singing voice, it sounds nice.
I think you need to work a little bit more on singing and playing the guitar at the same time, it can be quite difficult to get the strumming patterns and volume right when you're trying to sing and play, I've found, and I think I saw some of those problems in this song.
I really enjoy your voice, but I felt the guitar playing was lacking a bit in terms of volume and rhythm.
Cool stuff dude, digging the stereo. Only complain is that I think this needs to be a full song with loads of stuff going on after the intro!
Thanks! I may end up adding to this song down the line. Or I'll just make a new song that follows this one.
A bit repetitive, you could have just shortened it to around 2 minutes to be honest.
And if you are going to string it out for a long time, try making each loop a little different, add or remove instruments, change the notes a little, doesn't have to be much, just to let the listener know it's not exactly the same again.
And I'm a hypocrite since my songs are just the same thing repeated over with a bunch of shit added in.
Thanks for the review Poonpun!
I agree that it is a bit repetitive, although it is meant to be that way. I've created the song for people to use for their arcade/retro/8-bit games and a lot of them contain short, looped songs.
I made the song 'round 5 minutes so people would be able to cut something off if needed.
I could've extended the song a bit with a couple of more changed sections though.
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